Venereous


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The pots of paint acts as an 
aphrodisiac in your remembrance.
Oh, how the fresh paint glistened on you 
skin by the soft caress of the moon; 
delighted me, made me swoon.
Oh, how those hues embellished your flesh
on those peppery nights, 
summoning me, calling me over to you.
All those memories,
I shall always cradle within me.
It was only the yesteryear 
and I still remember as if it was today.
But alas, your sweet kisses, 
your soft caresses,
the hot sweaty nights of passionate 
coupling were not enough for me.
My heart was notorious, 
always seeking; demanding for more.
While you satiated my body’s craving
my heart, my soul yearned 
for more—everlasting.
My mind, suffocating with the thought; 
only if it could weave some more memories,
memories of you, with you.
I plummeted deep, drowning in the vastness
which I thought was your love;
tried to create something out of your leftovers,
but all I ever did was sink in the process.
When I looked back, my eyes cast above—
I saw you, merrily floating on the shallow end
leaving my heart in tatters;
and here I am now,
lamenting over the remnants.

© Sohinee Dey

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*I don’t own any of the images/artworks included in this post. Image/Artwork credit belong to its rightful owner.* If you are the owner of the image/artwork, let me know. I’ll credit you.

So, as I promised, I’m back with a new writing. Hope you all liked it. Would love to hear your thoughts on this.

31 thoughts on “Venereous

  1. my valiant soul Jul 5, 2017 — 10:29 am

    This is amazing!Your writings are great.

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    1. Aww thank you so much! 🤗❤

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      1. my valiant soul Jul 5, 2017 — 10:30 am

        🙂

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    1. Thank you for reading! 😊😇

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      1. It has been a good time

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  2. themonochromereaper Jul 5, 2017 — 11:17 am

    Splendid! You make the words come alive😊

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    1. Aww thank you so much. Your words means a lot to me. 🤗😇

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      1. themonochromereaper Jul 5, 2017 — 6:41 pm

        You’re welcome😊

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  3. You’ve captured the essence of the painting beautifully. Your words and equal to the artists brush strokes.

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    1. Thank you for your words. Means a lot to me 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome. Credit where due.

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      2. Yes I do that. I credit the images/pictures/artwork used in my posts to their rightful owner. If not known, I let my readers know that I’m only the owner of the poem 🙂

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      3. And a great poem it was 😊

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  4. Beautiful! Your writing is lovely 🙂

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    1. Oh my! You were serious when you said you would love to read my write-ups. Thank you so much. Truly, means a lot. Glad to connect with you. ❤

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  5. Whoa! Great post: The caption, the featured image, and the write-up itself. Keep on soaring.

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      1. Peter Adewumi Jul 19, 2017 — 6:17 pm

        You’re gladly welcome!

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  6. Excellent…beautifully crafted…glad to find your blog…☺☺👍

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      1. You are welcome..☺

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  7. Oh yeah we are liking it so much 💗😍

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  8. Hey! I stumbled accross your post and I am happy I did! I love your writing, delicate and strong. Well done!

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    1. Thank you so much! 😇❤. You can stop by anytime 😊

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